Take Our Chances...Again and Again and Again

So I have reached the point of total frustration. The song Take Our Chances is just not working. I'm not sure what is wrong and why I cannot get it to sound good no matter what I do. It might be time to just do a complete overhaul and start from scratch. This track is supposed to be the opening track for the Album and as such I'm trying to get it done first. If it doesn't work out I may just scrap it and keep the second version that ALSO appears on the Album as the penultimate song. I'm just not sure what to replace it with as the opener.

I'll keep you posted on the progress or lack thereof.